I did my best in handing in an understandable version of the essay I have now... I've only properly written maybe over 1000 words, I've definitely done referencing wrong, don't know how I would condense my conversation with geraint, and I don't even know if some parts are relevant or not... basically everything is very uncertain, but I kind of know where I'm going by the end, I hope. Basically I realised this week that the feeling that I've had about the diorama is a lot more about how I encounter nature, or how we do in general, and how strange it is to experience an artificial one in a museum setting... but yes, below is how rough the planning part was in my hand in...
